Wednesday 28 August 2019

West coast hockey

This year I have been selected in the U'13 West Coast hockey team we will have 3 tournaments, one in Blenheim, one in Christchurch and one in Oamaru. This weekend I am going to the tournament in Blenheim. We have 2 or 3 games against Marlboroough, Nelson and Christchurch. The team from Buller pulled out at the last minute so were not going on Friday now we are going on Saturday.    

4 comments:

  1. Kia ora Callum! My name is Hana and I'm a year 5 from Yaldhurst Model School!

    I like the way you explained who you are going against.

    I don't play hockey, but some people in my class do. especially Laura and Shjon. (I think that's how you spell it) But their more into ice hockey, not so much just regular hockey.

    Maybe next time you could add more pictures for a pop of colour. so the blog post is more eye catching.

    From Hana :3

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  2. Kia Ora Callum, I like your post on west coast hockey. Congratulations!
    I am also in the hockey team but obviously in the girls one.
    Good job
    From Honor

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  3. Kia Ora Callum, it's Kaleb here.

    I really like this blog post although it looks a bit plain, so maybe next time you could put a cool photo of you playing hockey. What is your favourite position?? I don't have a favourite position.

    Kai Pai, from Kaleb.

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  4. kia ora callum brayden from yaldhurst school.
    I loved when you said that you were in a hockey team I was for winter sports.Did you think about how big you wanted the words so they would make sense so the reader could read it more clearer.
    how come you did not add any photos of you playing hockey it would make it more exciting.
    Kind regards
    brayden yms

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.