Hi Callum its Frank here from Karoro School. I like the way you did a DLO about a place in Greymouth. It is very good. It was cool how you said that it is a good place for tourists to enjoy our history. Next time I think you can put a bit more information. BYE : )
Hi Callum its Korban here. I like how you have got lots of writing on your work all about Shanty Town. I think that next time some pictures would be great to go with your information.
kia Ora Callum I really like your blog post about Shantytown.This reminds me of when I done Shantytown writing. Maybe next time you could add a bit more Information.
This is a great DLO Callum. You have used good colours and a clear, easy to read font.
ReplyDeleteHi Callum its Frank here from Karoro School. I like the way you did a DLO about a place in Greymouth. It is very good. It was cool how you said that it is a good place for tourists to enjoy our history. Next time I think you can put a bit more information. BYE : )
ReplyDeleteHi Callum its Korban here. I like how you have got lots of writing on your work all about Shanty Town. I think that next time some pictures would be great to go with your information.
ReplyDeletekia Ora Callum I really like your blog post about Shantytown.This reminds me of when I done Shantytown writing. Maybe next time you could add a bit more Information.
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