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WOW Callum! "I swoop down from the misty abyss" This sentence has instantly given me an image in my mind, which is exactly what we were trying to do with our writing. Which of your 4 words did you change using a thesaurus? Keep up the great work!
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WOW Callum! "I swoop down from the misty abyss" This sentence has instantly given me an image in my mind, which is exactly what we were trying to do with our writing. Which of your 4 words did you change using a thesaurus? Keep up the great work!
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