Friday 24 April 2015

ANZAC poem - work in progress

poppy's red as blood  
humans pale as snow 
guns  brown as leather 
hats  as green as grass 
nifes as siver as 50 cents 
bows as black as mold 
cookies as bergendy as a box
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  1. Unknown12 May 2015 at 16:54

    Hi Callum I really liked the part when you said poppy,s as red as blood humans as pale as snow.

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