Kia Ora, Callum its Hannah from M3 here! Wow, that's a very interesting mythical creature you have there! I like the way that you added what it liked and what it disliked, and the age! I think your goal next time is good, and you should write it out with paragraphs. Other than that, I think it is great!
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Hi Callum. This is Korban from Karoro School in Room Five. I really like the piece of art and how you put writing in it. Does it have more to its body or is it just that? I think you could make more of the body and not make too much tentacles on your creature. Are you going to write about your creature in a story?
Kia Ora, Callum its Hannah from M3 here!
ReplyDeleteWow, that's a very interesting mythical creature you have there! I like the way that you added what it liked and what it disliked, and the age! I think your goal next time is good, and you should write it out with paragraphs. Other than that, I think it is great!
Good Job, from Hannah
(Please visit my blog by clicking my name!)
Hi Callum. This is Korban from Karoro School in Room Five. I really like the piece of art and how you put writing in it. Does it have more to its body or is it just that? I think you could make more of the body and not make too much tentacles on your creature. Are you going to write about your creature in a story?
ReplyDeleteHi Callum I like your work, I like how you explained the colours maybe you could put more information and right a story about it.
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