Friday, 4 November 2016

Writing T4 W4

This week for Writing I did design a Mythical creature next time I will use  paragraphs in my work.



3 comments:

  1. Kia Ora, Callum its Hannah from M3 here!
    Wow, that's a very interesting mythical creature you have there! I like the way that you added what it liked and what it disliked, and the age! I think your goal next time is good, and you should write it out with paragraphs. Other than that, I think it is great!

    Good Job, from Hannah
    (Please visit my blog by clicking my name!)

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  2. Hi Callum. This is Korban from Karoro School in Room Five. I really like the piece of art and how you put writing in it. Does it have more to its body or is it just that? I think you could make more of the body and not make too much tentacles on your creature. Are you going to write about your creature in a story?

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  3. Hi Callum I like your work, I like how you explained the colours maybe you could put more information and right a story about it.

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