Friday, 17 March 2017

Literacy W7 T1

This week me and Emil Did an introduction about shantytown

2 comments:

  1. Hi Callum its Frank here from Karoro School. I like the way you did a DLO about a place in Greymouth. It is very good. It was cool how you said that it is a good place for tourists to enjoy our history. Next time I think you can put a bit more information. BYE : )

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  2. Hi Callum its Korban here. I like how you have got lots of writing on your work all about Shanty Town. I think that next time some pictures would be great to go with your information.

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