Fox and a girl
My hunger was irresistible .I dove over the fence to grab a chicken but a little girl stopped me and I ran away with a sqell . I saw a duck I raced into grab it nowon stopped me. a little girl was running
I ran over a hill and dived over the little girl . I did not stop untilshe was lost I thought she was lost when she jumps on me with a knife she looks mental then she looks sorry for me and lets me go
a big snow storm comes and she drops her lanton I race over and warm her up with my fluffy coat she wakes up and I race away her mum and dad come I’m up on .the same hill that I was on
when I jumped and ran the girls mother and father come and takeher home
the end
by callum
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